Avril’s Chapter is Done
Leave a commentAugust 14, 2017 by dborys
I’d intended the excerpt linked in this blog post to be the end of the chapter, but subsequent replotting has moved it to later in the book. Still, I hope the voice sounds authentic.
I didn’t get as much writing done last week as the week before, but I did finally finish chapter three, told through Avril’s voice.Over 2000 words, in fact, I’m probably going to have to pare it down.
For months before I started plotting, I was researching the subject of LGBTQ, particularly how it affects kids living on the streets. But most of what I’d found was about gay, lesbian, or transgender and when I tried applying any of this to Avril, I wasn’t satisfied, as I’ve written about before.
Thankfully I found a blog by someone who, like Avril, also doesn’t want to completely transition to female and it has been helpful, I think. Here’s a small bit of the chapter. This feels more authentic than my first post, don’t you think? I hope so.
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Category: Cry Baby Cry, Street Stories Series